Box 1
Contains 11 Results:
Manuscript, circa 1950 - 1960
"The Pure and Clear" Short Story, 1956
The short story in this folder is an early draft of what will later become "I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun" in All I Asking For Is My Body. This is the earliest-written draft pertaining to All I Asking For Is My Body in this collection.
Early Partial Drafts, circa 1950 - 1975
Early Partial Drafts, circa 1950 - 1975
This folder contains versions of the story of Obaban's death. The title of this story fluctuates, but it appears most often in this folder and throughout the collection as "Obaban's Ghost." Later, this story evolves into "The Substitute" in the published version of All I Asking For Is My Body.
Early Partial Drafts, circa 1950 - 1975
This folder contains an early draft of "The Substitute," a deleted chapter featuring "Mr. Snook" the teacher, and arbitrary draft pages from All I Asking For Is My Body.
"A Samurai's Word" Short Story, circa 1950 - 1975
This folder contains three drafts arranged in chronological order of the deleted short story "A Samurai's Word". The inclusion of a table of contents in this folder provides evidence that Milton Murayama originally intended it follow "I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun" as part of All I Asking For Is My Body.
"I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun" Draft, circa 1950 - 1975
This folder contains a draft of the short story "I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun." This story was first published in the University of Arizona's Arizona Quarterly journal in 1959 (Volume 15, Number 2), and was later revised and reprinted in All I Asking For Is My Body in 1975.
Manuscript #1, circa 1950 - 1975
Manuscript #2, circa 1950 - 1975
Manuscript #3, circa 1950 - 1975
This file contains the third manuscript of All I Asking For Is My Body. This draft does not contain a copy of "I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun." "The Stubstitute" is present, although in this manuscript it is integrated into the main body of the novel as Chapter One as opposed to remaining as a short story. This manuscript contains minimal handwritten edits and marginalia.
Manuscript #4, circa 1950 - 1975
This folder contains the fourth and final printed manuscript of All I Asking For Is My Body. This draft does not contain a copy of "I'll Crack Your Head Kotsun." "The Stubstitute" is present, although in this manuscript it is integrated into the main body of the novel as Chapter One as opposed to remaining as a short story.